Rylord's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[What should have happened]

Probably the best voice acting on NG.

Yoda is the best character hands down. Seiously, the guy playing yoda sounds SUPER hot. If I were a girl, I would totally send him naked pictures of myself with me and my hot and sexualy experimental friends. I bet his dick is like, 4, probably 5 feet long. The only problem with this flash is that yoda is only in one scene.

Seiously, good job.

[X's Awakening]

First Flash? Pretty Good!

For your first flash this is Awesome! I can see where you tried some more complex stuff, and I think it some places, it worked (ex. Smoke from X's capsule). The sound effects were also done well (but make sure to watch your sound levels!). I really want to see more from you, so heres a list of stuff to look out for next time.

Animation means being ALIVE:
In several places, all your characters just stand still and blink (the talking parts). Remember that changing shots, or animating character gestures will help deliver the dialouge better as well as keep the viewer intrested. This is even more important when there is alot of dialouge (like in your moive).

Speed it up:
Some of the animations (alot of the fighting) was a little slow paced. I'm assuming because this was your first flash, you didn't play around with ajusting the framerate. Try making little flash movies to test beam movement and getting a good feel for timing in animation. Don't be afraid to turn the framerate up to 18 or even 24 fps.

Reading??! READING!??!! WHAT DO YOU THINK THIS IS? THE INTERNET?!:
At the beginning, put a spot to skip through the text. Some people read faster than others, and waiting for the text can be boring.

Keep up the Good Work!

[An odd Nintendo short 3]

Clearly the best thing on Newgrounds

This is now one of my favorite submissions to newgrounds! Good work, I love that narrarator, he sounds hot.

[Decline of Video Gaming]

Really Funny!

My favorite part was the outtakes, where you made fun of English sterotypes. Everyone stading around in monocles, you can feel the sarcasm dripping out of the cartoon...

Best line: We are so incredibly english!
Second best line: Come on blue! Dry like you mean it!

[Worms: Automatic]

Stream

Okay, It was good. But I don't think you streamed your sound. When you put your sound into flash, click on the properties menu, and look where it says "sync". Beside that it should say "event". Click on the drop down menu and select "Stream". It will make all the music fit the animation. Good work.

[slab o' vic]

Hilarious!!!

Ya, you're right. You won't get it if your not Australian...then again...Im Canadian...Okay. If your not Austalian or Canadian, you won't get it...then again...

esspat responds:

there's vb in canada? awesome.

[ClockCrew StarWars]

Say it with me now..."stream"

Ya, your flash is fucked...

neckro responds:

No , you have a shit computer , everyone else's was fine.. pennor boy!

[8 Bit D&D]

Its to bad I've seen it before...

This audio is also in a game called SUMMONER for PS2. Its a secret you get when you beat the game. Their is not a narrorator in the game version. The guy with the high pitched voice is a huge boss in a kitchen with big claws, the DM and "Galstaff" are people from the game, and the guy with the lisp is a guy from another game by that company. Its really funny. But, they got it from Dead Alewives. Good job.

[Gary Colman for Governor]

This is funny...

...uh..ya...I think I already said it was funny...

Voxton responds:

Well, cool -- thanks for the vote!

[Jimmy: Payback]

But...

Why didn't he take the badguys rifle? You could kick ALOT of ass with that...